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Re: The Boy and the Beast PART 1
Hi! Nice work writing this! 😊 I’m going to review just the first part because I’m a bit short on time. Once upon a time, in a faraway land there ...
Feb 13 -
Re: how do you hold the weight of the world?
Hi! Great work. Love the assembly of the text I was wondering if the shift in shape at the end was also on purpose? A theme of sorrow and wish ...
Feb 13 -
Re: Assorted thoughts of a politically minded teenager
the American political spectrum as a whole has shifted away from liberal views towards centrism and individualism yet again. From a global perspective the USA was never centrist to begin ...
Feb 10 -
Re: An Appeal to Decency
I am presenting an argument, not from falsities or from piety, but from facts and reason. There is a simple truth that I am nearly certain almost no woman knows. ...
Feb 10 -
Re: Kai Shappley
Now I'm not going to go through everything here in my review so I'll just be doing a kind of general review here: So to put it into few words ...
Oct 19, 2018 -
Re: Beast Chapter 1
Hi! Anzius here for a quick review: so to begin I must note that I won't be quoting specific parts from the work a much as I usually would since ...
Oct 19, 2018 -
Re: I wander in city of dead
Well, it is always quite difficult to review poetry, but I'll give it a shot. I'm not sure if it is on purpose but the first "i" isn't capitalised, but ...
Oct 17, 2018 -
Re: Comparisons Between The Education System in Australia and Indonesia
Education is the backbone for country development. - Instead of "country development", the term "national development" not only sounds better but is also in common usage. Usually most developed countr
Oct 17, 2018 -
Re: Waiting
Firstly: Great work! I really liked it, I'm not sure if "deep damp darkness" was written purposefully to roll off the tongue so easily but well done with that one. ...
Jun 26, 2018 -
Re: The Camp
On the first sentence it should either be "all 5 senses hitting its every angle" or "... hitting it from ever angle". "in a strange puppet like manner" - Here ...
Jun 26, 2018 -
Re: The Forest by Frostburrow
I should have known by the gnarled roots of the trees that clawed at the dirt of the path, dragging it towards their skeletal frames plated in sliver bark Silver ...
Jun 11, 2018 -
Re: Time of Death (Prologue)
Do you know how does it feel to wake up every morning, knowing that you’re going to die. I don’t mean die as in its inevitable, everyone dies. The first ...
Jul 24, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
Hi ^^ Firstly I want to say that this is a good piece of writing, it just has some "thecnical" mistakes to it. I won't start fussing with the story ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Winning Over Winchester (Chapter 1)
It was Christmastime, freezing cold, and snowing. An old beggar sat on the street corner, singing for passer-bys . He sang a song that he had written. It was mostly ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Ignorance was never Bliss: *correct* Prologue and Chapter 1
Ahhh. The smell of a review!! I already apologize if this review isn't really helpfull, since this is the first review I've done in a while... (6-8 months) :D Here ...
Jan 20, 2010
